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life is a lovely chaos


The suffocation in my lungs releases a breath at a time
There is no strength in my spine
But I stack bricks instead.
I see the moon after nights and hours
I see faces in flesh after a lifetime
Emotions other than survival and fear fill me
Tears well up my eyes-
I see the sun from the eyes of so many trees.
Time twists itself to fit its magnanimous presence
In my small head,
I cry in remembrance
I cry in gratitude.
Hands have grown with rings on them,
My nails have grown so much too.
Life is piercing me from all sides,
I am another lost bird with a soul.
Cities brimming with clouds and stories
Surrender to the groud- rain comes crashing down.
Dreams are reflections of ocean in wells-
A yellow leaf swaying away and away
With the endless blue waves.

~insight07

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10 responses to “Release”

  1. short-prose-fiction Avatar

    What a gorgeous poem
    “I am another lost bird with a soul.
    Cities brimming with clouds and stories”

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    1. insight07 Avatar

      Thank you so much! 🙂 I am so glad you liked this poem. I had written this when I left home after 5 months of staying indoors. So it’s a special one. 🙂

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      1. short-prose-fiction Avatar

        Thank you for sharing that with me. It is special indeed.
        🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

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  2. N.D Pawar Avatar

    Nice poem….

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    1. insight07 Avatar

      Thank you 😊

      Like

  3. sandyroybessandbugzy Avatar

    It is so interesting to know when you wrote this poem. It is beautiful in its raw understanding of coming out after 5 months. Thank you.

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    1. insight07 Avatar

      Thank you so much Sandy! It was during the first few months of the pandemic, so was quite an experience 😅

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      1. sandyroybessandbugzy Avatar

        Yes, I remember it well. My husband had covid at that time and I was really scared.

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      2. insight07 Avatar

        Sometimes I feel the world has forgotten what all of us have been through!

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