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life is a lovely chaos


Sometimes I feel

The very blood in my body is drying

But other times I feel fine

So fine that I think

And think about all the people in my life.

An odd collection of different facets

Marbled pieces with shiny surfaces.

An arm and inch between me and the world

Faces hover over my neck

Breaths of expectation on my heated skin.

We are going through the myriad of actions

Butterflies on my trembling fingers-

I kiss these pink beings with all my love

Even though sometimes I feel

The very love in me is drying.

But other times I feel fine.

~insight07

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6 responses to “Fine”

  1. Kanchan Balodi Avatar

    I am truly speechless. The visual and tactile imagery is used beautifully 🌼

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    1. insight07 Avatar

      Thank you so much Kanchan 😊🌻

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  2. jahnavigouri13 Avatar

    Wow! The imagery you painted with your words is so vivid. Brilliant writing!!💫

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    1. insight07 Avatar

      Thank you, Jahnavi 😊

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  3. Athousandbitsofpaper Avatar

    Love these descriptions, beautifully written

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