How can I untangle these thoughts of mine?
A beautiful mess
A lovely chaos
How can I make sense of these confusions?
Seamless thoughts
Imagined reality
How do I differentiate fantasy from memories?
Desired outcomes
Unsatisfied wishes
How do I decide the course of action?
Dreadful decisions
Fearful confrontations
How do I choose between perfect alternatives?
Scary what ifs
Uncertain future
How can I do so much at once?
Different priorities
Urgent needs
How do I do it all?
How do I do it right?
~insight07
Copyright ©Devika Todi. All rights reserved.
These are my thoughts too when new cycles begin but I could not say it so well!
Maybe wise people’s decisions are always born out of chaos…
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Thank you! And yes, i agree with you. I mean, for me, after the decisions are made, i miss this time of complete confusion.
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Hi Devika. The poem is so nicely written. It reminds of life and the decisions we have to make often quickly that shapes our future and how life treats us. Thank you so much for liking my poem ‘ Dilemma!’Be Safe and Well. The Foureyed Poet.
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I actually wrote this poem when i had to make a life changing decision, one could say. So yes, i am glad you understood the core of this poem! Thank you 🙂
And i hope this day is good to you.
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Reblogged this on 2nddaniel and commented:
Girl gone awesome
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Thank you for the reblog!
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Well written! After all what’s life without a bit of chaos?
Have a great day, Devika!
-Soumi
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Exactly. You too, Soumi.
Thank you! 🙂
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You are welcome!
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Hey listen Todo,listen!:P
This is about the new life-new college ka confusion you’re talking about, is it not?*expectant raised brows*
I felt this way,and a little more.That’s the reality of life,don’t you think? Every new thing,every new situation freaks us out.We stress over it for months.And when we are faced with the reason for our pathetic condition,we realise it wasn’t all that it was hyped up to be.It isn’t all that bad.Do not fret,girl!You’re gonna be just fine:D
P.S. Feel free to point out that I was interpreting your words all wrong.I am wrong sometimes,you know.I don’t mind.:P
Lol
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Haha that is so sweet Akku! :*
I had written this poem earlier actually.
I was not that stressed about all of this then.
But right now, this tension is magnified! Can’t wait for it to get over.
Hopefully, everything will be fine 🙂
You are really sweet.
Your exams got over.
Yae! 😛
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Oh I feel you.AND YOU WILL BE JUST FINE.:D
Aaannnd,my exams did get over!Yipppeeeeee!:P
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Happy for you Akku!
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That’s so sweet of you, Todo.:*
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😀
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Man!This is embarrassing!Guess I was wrong huh?
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Very well written..Quite a fiasco you would be in to come up with such a piece.
and i like the colorful tree too.. its amazing!!!
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Thank you! I had been going through tough times 😛
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Is everything fine now? I hope things good.
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Can’t really say. But I am handling it better 🙂
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Great!! you will win it too.
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The colorful chaotic tree is a perfect accompaniment to your words. It is a maze, isn’t it?
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Thank you! Making decisions is a maze, I get lost each time!
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I’m starting a new job on Monday and this expresses how I am feeling. Well done.
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Thank you! And good luck for your new job 😀
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Dont try to make sense of the lovely chaos. I know it sounds terrifying to continue in the chaos. But sometimes you just have to roll with it.
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Yes. And hope that all this chaos is not in vain.
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lovely poem
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Thank you
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Scale of preference comes to view….
I love the poem, the back and forth, the intrigues and Irony…
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Thank you so much Ojembe 🙂
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Interesting poem, love how you wrote it in a thinking process order. Anyone can pretty much identify themselves with this.
Nice job :)!
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Thank you Sari! 🙂
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Nicely penned…alas life is all about biting these difficult bullets…
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Indeed, thank you 😊
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