I want to be forgotten ;
Like a shadow in the dark night
Fly like a black raven
In the cover of the moonless sky
Merge with everything
Seen by nothing.
Yet, I’m seen
By the two dark eyes
That always seem to follow.
~insight07
I would love to hear your interpretation of this poem.
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Sure.
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Great piece 👍
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Thank you 🙂
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Not bad
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🙂
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My Interpretation; I feel you are trying to escape the evil in this world, yet it keeps finding you.
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Thank you for commenting! 🙂
Do you ever feel the same Way?
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I used to, but that was long ago. I live my life differently now with all faith and hope in the Lord. Not that bad things don’t still happen to me, but I’m more capable of handling them now (stronger, if you will). I look at life with a different set of eyes now. I live in the light….and darkness can’t live in the light.
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Well said. Good luck to you, for you life ahead 🙂
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Thank you, and you as well! 🙂
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^.^
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I think we want to hide at times. But no matter how hard you try to break free there’s allows that thought of “is something watching me? “
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Exactly. We’re never truly hidden. Something or someone always keeps an eye on us.
I hope you have a great weekend. 🙂
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You as well darling. Hide in the open, no one looks there because it’s always the same.
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Short but truly touching:)
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Thank you 🙂
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I found this one simply amazing but can’t describe exactly what.
I’m going to make this poem as a picture (with all the credits given, of course) and use it as my WhatsApp display. 😄
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Thank you! Haha sure. Don’t forget to send it to me 😉
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Sure. 😊
Is there any options to upload the picture here?
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I guess not. You can mail it to me at insight07blog@Gmail.com 🙂
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Okay. 😊
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Wow!!
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Thank you dear!
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Beautifully expressed! Re-read it several times!
I think it is about escaping from something within the self, which is difficult to do (the two black eyes which locks one in their sight)..
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Thank you so much!
I really like your interpretation 🙂
I’m glad you could make sense of my words. I hope you have a good day.
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Thanks! Wish you a good day too!
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🙂
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This is very captivating. An incredible work
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Thank you Janna!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Amazing poem. I thought perhaps it is about guilt.
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Thank you so much!
Nice interpretation.
We do try to escape our guilt, but it keeps torturing us.
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I think you are pretty amazing. 🙂
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Thank you dear 🙂
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pleasure.
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what is that link about that you sent me?
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It appears automatically everytime I comment or when someone else comments. Ignore it.
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oh okay.
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Great dear 😄
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Thanks!
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