Forgotten


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I want to be forgotten ;
Like a shadow in the dark night
Fly like a black raven
In the cover of the moonless sky
Merge with everything
Seen by nothing.
Yet, I’m seen
By the two dark eyes
That always seem to follow.

~insight07

I would love to hear your interpretation of this poem.

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41 Comments

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  2. dorcas254 says:

    Great piece πŸ‘

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    1. insight07 says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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  3. Slf4ever71 says:

    My Interpretation; I feel you are trying to escape the evil in this world, yet it keeps finding you.

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    1. insight07 says:

      Thank you for commenting! πŸ™‚
      Do you ever feel the same Way?

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      1. Slf4ever71 says:

        I used to, but that was long ago. I live my life differently now with all faith and hope in the Lord. Not that bad things don’t still happen to me, but I’m more capable of handling them now (stronger, if you will). I look at life with a different set of eyes now. I live in the light….and darkness can’t live in the light.

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      2. insight07 says:

        Well said. Good luck to you, for you life ahead πŸ™‚

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      3. Slf4ever71 says:

        Thank you, and you as well! πŸ™‚

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  4. any1mark66 says:

    I think we want to hide at times. But no matter how hard you try to break free there’s allows that thought of “is something watching me? “

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    1. insight07 says:

      Exactly. We’re never truly hidden. Something or someone always keeps an eye on us.

      I hope you have a great weekend. πŸ™‚

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      1. any1mark66 says:

        You as well darling. Hide in the open, no one looks there because it’s always the same.

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  5. Short but truly touching:)

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    1. insight07 says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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  6. Faraz Ansari says:

    I found this one simply amazing but can’t describe exactly what.
    I’m going to make this poem as a picture (with all the credits given, of course) and use it as my WhatsApp display. πŸ˜„

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    1. insight07 says:

      Thank you! Haha sure. Don’t forget to send it to me πŸ˜‰

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      1. Faraz Ansari says:

        Sure. 😊
        Is there any options to upload the picture here?

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      2. insight07 says:

        I guess not. You can mail it to me at insight07blog@Gmail.com πŸ™‚

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      3. Faraz Ansari says:

        Okay. 😊

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  7. celesteloubser7917 says:

    Wow!!

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    1. insight07 says:

      Thank you dear!

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  8. gabbartrip says:

    Beautifully expressed! Re-read it several times!

    I think it is about escaping from something within the self, which is difficult to do (the two black eyes which locks one in their sight)..

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    1. insight07 says:

      Thank you so much!
      I really like your interpretation πŸ™‚
      I’m glad you could make sense of my words. I hope you have a good day.

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      1. gabbartrip says:

        Thanks! Wish you a good day too!

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  9. This is very captivating. An incredible work

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    1. insight07 says:

      Thank you Janna!

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      1. You’re welcome πŸ™‚

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  10. Amazing poem. I thought perhaps it is about guilt.

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    1. insight07 says:

      Thank you so much!
      Nice interpretation.
      We do try to escape our guilt, but it keeps torturing us.

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  11. I think you are pretty amazing. πŸ™‚

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    1. insight07 says:

      Thank you dear πŸ™‚

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      1. what is that link about that you sent me?

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      2. insight07 says:

        It appears automatically everytime I comment or when someone else comments. Ignore it.

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  12. twenty four darker blog's says:

    Great dear πŸ˜„

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